paladinian
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Post by paladinian on Jun 24, 2006 23:28:41 GMT -5
Through the swirling darkness of dispair Your screaming spirit goes Take a deep breath and prepare To go through the violent throws The last thought of friends and foes Flit through your tormented mind You grab the knife and hold it ascross the roads Push down and pull across In the last second you feel the grind Down the abyss you remeber Your loved and cherished And your spirit is wracked in pain The tears your parents will shed when you perish You struggle to not go insane But now your with the dead There is nothing to do, exept contemplate That last sad thought through your head
Emo
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Post by cloud strife on Jul 1, 2006 22:48:20 GMT -5
i am really likeing your poems man, very discriptive, and i like how you keep it flowing
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