jayo
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Dark warlock (Site coder)
Posts: 16
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Post by jayo on May 13, 2006 14:31:40 GMT -5
Theres a guy in a car he drinks to forget scar on his throat bullet wound on his chest he sees no way out he figured it out a way to forget he drives into a tree to his death
First poem i wrote ever ever ever
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Post by cloud strife on May 13, 2006 15:14:24 GMT -5
not bad, ending could use some work, but still not bad
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