paladinian
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Post by paladinian on May 12, 2006 18:43:24 GMT -5
A black body that glitters, Teeth that will give you the shivers, Eyes like gold, Turns your heart cold, A roar in the night, Cause even the brave fright, Talons like steel, Blood stained from the latest meal, A flame of bright green, Acompanied by a shrill scream, Ebony wings unfold, Lo and behold!, It has just left its lair Ready to rip and tear, Locked onto its prey, The unassuming animal has seen its last day For the thrills, Is the reason the dragon kills That took 10 minutes outta my life to put together So lets hear some reviews ;D
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Post by cloud strife on May 13, 2006 10:18:19 GMT -5
HOLY FUCKIN' **** JOHN YOUR A POET!
nice work, keep it up , i liked how you worked up to the conclusion and kept us hanging, not telling us you were talking about a dragon, exelent!
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paladinian
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Post by paladinian on May 26, 2007 19:52:45 GMT -5
who ****** with my poem, drake u cock muncher i dont rtmeber how it ges now lol
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Post by cloud strife on May 26, 2007 23:31:29 GMT -5
lmao, thats cuz your an idiot... you idiot
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